All Comments on 'Revenge'

by steele1701

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Helen1899Helen18998 months ago

it was only missing, a good beginning, a good middle and a good ending

gfrhgfrhover 4 years ago
Bad

Sorry, but it's not revenge if the other person enjoys it. 1 star

spiderman1spiderman1about 17 years ago
needed a finish

The story need something more at the end.

Happy TrailsHappy Trailsover 18 years ago
sorry

it wasn't too bad but give me a break, you couldn't give the woman a little back bone. If she was so high on the bible then she'd have fought or begged, pleaded, something. You made her into a doormat and that's pitiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
it was good..

he should have knocked her up.

charleybearcharleybearover 18 years ago
Needed one final sentence.

As he walks out the door he hears his wife whisper, "Thanks John (or whatever his name is), I really needed that."

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