All Comments on 'Revenge'

Sorry.

using cockle-shells and daffodils.putting them in a row. TK U MLJ LV NV

This chapter has no relationship to your title or description... and no indication of being a "part 1" or anything...?

You wrote one page of him shagging the maid which seems to have no relevance to the story. Odd.

Where was the revenge? It was just sex. Your hero was not married!

Good start I think?

Thanks for the read.

Everything is believable except him being ready to start the project the next day, if he was any good at his job I would expect to wait several months for him to start!