All Comments on 'Revenge Ch. 02'

Two obscenely rich people meeting in a lower class motel for an affair? No personal security guards, no cottage or condo/apartment to go to? Some dumb ass landscaper, without citizenship who would flip like a coin if caught, is in charge! And why is Susie even in this story so much? **

Short multi part story that seems based around a rich man hiring a landscape gardener and then we go onto the sexual side of the gardeners life which is incomplete as is his business with his first major employer.

You gave the lead in. now we need to see what becomes of Hannah. Does she go find Lenox and do films or does she become a street urchin?

Continue when?

Finish the story.

THE AUTHOR IS ACTIVE BUT LEFT THIS TO BE CONTINUED THEN MOVED ON TO WRITE ANOTHER SERIES!

I've noticed that alot of writers are now producing crap, shitty stories, or sometimes writing a similar story but changed in certain ways. BUT NOW THEY WRITE STORYLINE THAT HAS POTENTIALLY BECOME A GOOD STORY BUT DONT BOTHER F**KING FINISHING IT, REALLY PI**ES ME OFF, complete the story or dont write it at all,

IM NOT THE ONLY ONE HATES IT.

Great story, BUT I Absolutely HATE stories end right in the middle of the story to never to be completed..

This is the second story of yours that I have read. Both just stopped at a "dead end". Seems you have stopped writing for quite a while now. If you ever come back online, hope you do a better ending to any new stories.

only downvoted because the full story is incomplete. otherwise it was ok for being so over-the-top