by alex_lover
The victim turns into the monster to avenge the injustice that besought him...The bisexual bit was a bit much..besides that it was nicely written..but the bisexual bit just seemed to be a little over the top as it is not an overnight thing for a man to put his peen in another mans ass..
we start the story with Susan the writer's wife playing around on her hubby the good hard working guy...Susan ends up being everyone's convenient slut and we ner hear anything from her dutiful
man again, but the story revolves around the guy Susan is playing with (Brad)? odd
Yuck. You must have some seriously messed up psyche to come up with this crap.
5* beginning, too verbose in the middle and 2* ending. The male sodomy at the end was stupid and unnecessary. Also, the verbiage wasted on the ridiculous notion that Alice would hate him for saving her life brought the whole thing down to mediocre at best.