by RampantSerenity
I can’t believe it took me this long to come across this wild story. This was one of the best and erotically original. It’s too bad you hadn’t crafted more stories because your work is phenomenal and completely endearing. Thanks for authoring and posting such an incredible piece of work.
I daresay, young Aurora has fallen in love with a human without even her own knowledge?
One of the best stories I have ever read
More please
last comment, I agree with you
Aurora, why don't you exsist?
If you do, please contact me at phoenix23ninja@gmail.com so we can meet
(and maybe recreate this story)
Aurora, Cass, Kaylee ... please become real someday.
I'm studying computers for this only. Really.
Any biologists here? :P
Between this and you marilith story you have got a lot of good ideas I can't wait to read more of them whether as continuations or as new parts to the world
very creepy tale of helpless girl gangraped by monsters. Which is essentially what this story is about
Fantastic and well done! I truly enjoyed this story and look forward to seeing more from you. Not many people write the Monster girl genre well. Bravo!
Truly caught me off guard how many directions you can take this I will be reading more of your work please continue to write you have a wonderful mind and a sharp vocabulary
I was rather unsure about starting to read this one because of the title but so glad I did. Loved it. Hope you make this a series but if not please do keep writing monster girl stuff, its a under utilized genre in erotic fiction and your very good at it.
I'd love to find out what happens next with Sean and Aurora. This is also a really excellent monster girl story with the manticores so powerful, wanton, and seductive, yet also with a softer side. Really well done in all regards. I hope you make this a series and write more.
I really enjoy how you portray these fantasy women. Aggressive but also gentle.
Also the idea of losing one's mind due to an overwhelming, enveloping pleasure brings shivers down one's spine.
Surprisingly there are not many GOOD stories ( like this one - but still could be longer) about them on Lit :). Maby Serenity will work on this problem :). I sure hope for more :)