All Comments on 'Right Place Wrong Time'

by Bongwater

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Interesting positioning, but unrealistic attachment procedure

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 7 years ago
I tried, really tried, to envision what you described, but I'm still confused why you made it so hard.

If you were using a magnetic lock, why couldn't you have made the contraption so that the magnet was on her crotch and the other part was on his mouth? She could have gotten dressed and into position, and then engaged the magnet.

You sure took the long road.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
fun story.

I could have done without the leotard. fun situation. I understood the setup after a little thought but it was not immediately obvious. Try another one.

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