All Comments on 'The Ring of Truth Ch. 01'

what

LOL, I hope that means you liked it.

I just hope you can maintain this, as well as the other series you've started. You seem to be able but don't stretch yourself too much.

Thanks very much for reading and enjoying. The compliment was great.

Is the next chapter on the way?

Great story so far.

Sorry, but this one has slipped to the back burner. I didn't get much feedback on it so I let it slide. I'll probably continue with it at some point. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. Thanks for letting me know.

This definitely needs to be followed up on!

I love finding a hot series I hadn't read before. On to chapter two!

Thanks for the pat on the back.

I'm sorry I couldn't get past the second chapter due to the MC being so stupid. I mean come on why would you make him such a moron. From the time he puts the ring on his finger, sexy things happen to him, and every time it comes off it ends. Additionally, he has to be told to put the ring back on, and when he does sexy things happen again. It just makes me upset that the mc is this fucking stupid. Sorry not sorry.

TLDR: Make your MC not a complete moronic dipshit with only two brain cells

poorly written couldn't fet past a page ot two