by petskunk
I'm sorry I couldn't get past the second chapter due to the MC being so stupid. I mean come on why would you make him such a moron. From the time he puts the ring on his finger, sexy things happen to him, and every time it comes off it ends. Additionally, he has to be told to put the ring back on, and when he does sexy things happen again. It just makes me upset that the mc is this fucking stupid. Sorry not sorry.
TLDR: Make your MC not a complete moronic dipshit with only two brain cells
Sorry, but this one has slipped to the back burner. I didn't get much feedback on it so I let it slide. I'll probably continue with it at some point. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. Thanks for letting me know.
Thanks very much for reading and enjoying. The compliment was great.
I just hope you can maintain this, as well as the other series you've started. You seem to be able but don't stretch yourself too much.