All Comments on 'Rise of the Warlock'

This isn't a free story shared on Literotica. This is an ad/teaser for a published story. At the *very* least something like that should be bold and obvious at the beginning of the story. Teasers like this belong on your own website, imo. Not fooling readers here.

Ive published this

www.smashwords.com/books/view/820918

Thank you, now chapter II

Very good well written and interesting

Good story , I look forward to more

Great start looking forward to the next chapter soon I hope.

I'll join with a few other comments, It's a good start with lots of possibility. Even it being only a Prologue, one can already see the first glimpses of your skill set. Hopefully there are many more Chapters to come, can't wait till then.

This is a great start. Tons of possibilities here. 5 stars.

I stumbled across your story and wonder where you will take us. So far? I like it. A lot.

This is a very nice story. Your set up for the future is wide open and you in such a short time have laid a very solid foundation. I cant to see what's next.

Great start man. I love it. You're a damn good writer

So please keep going!

Thanks for writing it for us:)

Ed

I'm trying to figure out how this story has caught me. Don't know but I look forward to more. Thanks!

A good opening with promising storyline. Waiting for further developments...

Nice opening hope to read more.