All Comments on 'Road Trip Ch. 01'

One of the best stories I've read in years! Character development was excellent. Plot and action were top notch. You put a new and refreshing spin on this genre. And you avoided every tired old cliche that usually accompanies FemDom stories. Congratulations, jlltec. Please keep writing.

Writing O.K. story sucks. Weak man is such a complete turn off, you and goodhusband are just into a sickness that makes most people ill, not erotic.

Wonderful story

i completely enjoyed this story! i enjoy being in a very similar relationship, though mine is virtual. some people just don't understand it, i guess. pay no attention to them - our individual differences are what make life interesting.

i can't believe how excited this story made me. i so wish i was that guy! i'm going to cum and eat it!

I want to be him.

I loved reading this story because it's pretty well written, and this is one of my fetish turn ons. Thanks for writing it! I look forward to reading the others!

hey, whatever floats your boat.

Shouldn't this be under fetish? Enjoyed it just the same.

My favourite fantasy...

I know I would do this if my wife requested it. Pretty scary to realize this. Thanx. What a sweet submissive tale.

Makes me so horny! I wish I could have been there to see them eating up that cum for their wives.

I read all four chapters of this story some time ago and gave this this chapter a 5. Last night I read just the first chapter and stroked and stroked but did not let myself cum.

My first wife had me clean my cum from her pussy once and nobody else ever knew. My third wife took me to a couple of BDSM parties but none were as hot as this. I think I would like to be both men. Made to shoot my cum into my mouth and all over my face and body and then fed by someone other than my wife and then to be Rick and fed a taste of of another man's cum.

He’s a HUSBAND, not a slave. But a actively a submissive husband on occasions. I’m loving it. J.

This made me jerk off and eat my own cum. So sexy and dirty.

What a hot, hot story!!! On my fav list for sure.

The idea of being the only naked male, shaved and doing whatever your wife instructs is very hot! I love it and would love to make this happen!

I don't get it. What's the big deal with shaved pubes and why are these girls so obsessed with bringing it up all the time? Lots of guys manscape and us women shave our pubes all the time.

I loved this story. Remember reading a few years ago.

This will have to be listed for our bucket list.