All Comments on 'Road Trip Turnout'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brilliant!

Can't wait to read more Love the denial.

Hornybiman67Hornybiman67over 6 years ago
Excellent

Looking forward for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
To be continued

Please please please you have to continue this story it is so good

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 6 years ago
See, the trouble with...

Non-Consent/Reluctance stories is that my imagination keeps kicking over into the betrayal-retribution scenarios. It can be very distracting to following the action.

I must say that I much prefer a healthy dose of Reluctance to most Non-Consent stories, so you met me there.

The writing was good. The plot was interesting, and there is enough curiosity about what is to follow. An excellent addition to a new year. I'll have to make a note to check back later.

ticklishsolesticklishsolesover 6 years ago
I Need A Road Trip!

It seems like a lifetime since I’ve been away on business. I wonder if I have what Robbie discovered in himself.

Ticklishsoles

HotForLitHotForLitabout 5 years ago
Brilliant story!!

So fucking hot!!

By the way, I noticed a few errors, in this one and another, some comas misplaced, words missing or mixed-up.

Would love to proof reading your work if you need one, your stories are fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
One of the best stories of this type ...

... or any type. Relentless. 5 stars.

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