by rimaday
Please please please you have to continue this story it is so good
Non-Consent/Reluctance stories is that my imagination keeps kicking over into the betrayal-retribution scenarios. It can be very distracting to following the action.
I must say that I much prefer a healthy dose of Reluctance to most Non-Consent stories, so you met me there.
The writing was good. The plot was interesting, and there is enough curiosity about what is to follow. An excellent addition to a new year. I'll have to make a note to check back later.
It seems like a lifetime since I’ve been away on business. I wonder if I have what Robbie discovered in himself.
Ticklishsoles
So fucking hot!!
By the way, I noticed a few errors, in this one and another, some comas misplaced, words missing or mixed-up.
Would love to proof reading your work if you need one, your stories are fantastic.
... or any type. Relentless. 5 stars.