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Click hereRobert was in shock. He had hardly gotten used to Beth showing off and now here she was talking about being tempted with another man's cock. It was almost too much but once again his prick had stiffened at the thought of his beautiful wife sucking on another man's erection.
Robert finally replied choosing his words carefully.
"Beth, I love you very much. As long as we are open and honest with each other, I feel that you should express yourself sexually no matter where it takes you."
Beth was stunned. He didn't say yes and he didn't say no. She would have to think about this for a while.
- COMMENTS
Willupbossover 5 years agoYou’re spinning a good tale Sirdix. Of course it is pretty obvious where this is going and I’m pretty sure Robert will one day regret not slowing Beth down a bit. I would encourage you to take more time with your editing. I know how much I enjoy rereading my own stories and often overlook simple errors. In your case most of the flaws are words being omitted. Slow down when you are editing and perhaps it may be helpful to read it slowly out loud so you will catch the missing words. For instance near the bottom of page one at the shoe store you say “even though she wearing no bra” you forgot the word “was”. There are several other examples of missing words but you get the idea. Other than that, keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoVote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
luvtodoitalmost 8 years agoAlthough your story isn't perfectly written, it made me perfectly hard! Thank you.
WatcherRobalmost 8 years agoI must agree with the previous comments. The basic story line is fun. You do need some editing help to make the interpersonal conversation better. I'm not sure the overnight attitude change is realistic. But this is your story and you can tell it your way.
