All Comments on 'Robinson Family Ch. 02'

That was good second chapter but on the short side. I like how you wrote the second chapter with both Alex and Melissa getting naked and from other parents. I like how Melissa was disciplined for talking back to her father. I just wish that you would lengthened the chapter and had them explore each others' body's or something else.

Don't delay. Keep this story cummin' and I hope that this family enjoys their sex as much as we enjoy reading about it.

Just when you get going you ABRUPTLY end the story. You have a REALLY, REALLY good thing going... make the next chapter(s) LONGER!

This could be a great story, but why the beatings? If they want to teach their kids about sex visually, fine. If they want unconditional obedience from their kids while under their roof, fine. But why beat the girl for no real reason? He want his sister. She wants her Brother, Father wants Daughter, and Mother wants Son. What is the problem? Biblical, Loving parents should teach their children how to love and pleasure each other. Not punish. We should each enjoy being Christian, or whatever belief we are. Making it brutal does not encourage believers to remain faithful to their beliefs. Sex is good

an being humiliated in such a manner?