All Comments on 'Rock Star Ch. 05'

but still needs an editor. You're getting better at catching things, but you still mix tenses occasionally, and use a few wrong words.

i agree with gravyrug, but i've got one major issue.. i'm not sure anyone can be that dense... taylor is an idiot and needs a smack upside the head, although the way he is going i'd doubt he learn anything from it

Jerry in Washington state, USA - You have succeeded in making me like Taylor and care about what happens to him. I look forward to what happens between him and Ann next chapter. Yes, there are occasional mistakes in the story that an editor might catch but I've read stories with far worse mistakes that supposedly had a good editor! Thanks for sharing this interesting story.