All Comments on 'Roman Holiday Ch. 08'

by Miguel59

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impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
The end?

Now that Rome finally entered the picture, this bad story ends? 1*

mtmike4004mtmike4004over 8 years ago
Jeanette's progression

I have thoroughly enjoyed the series so far. I have found Jeanette's progression especially compelling. I hope there are more chapters to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
gave you a 5 for effort and to help get

your score up. Good LW story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Boy I hope this is over

It can't end too soon. Better that it ended after chapter 1. This was awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Roland beat his whore wife into her stomach...

... and with a splash the nigger baby left her womb to be carried to the trash. Then Roland carried her to an chinese whore house where he made money for each time she popped out a yellow bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
White guilt

Rears its ugly head

yourreaderyourreaderover 8 years ago
Great Story

Miguel you're a great writer, please continue this story. Richard has such an exciting wife.

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