All Comments on 'Roman Holiday Ch. 10'

After ch 1 we knew this story. Keep writing, we'll keep giving ones.

The wife used the words of Hitler, the biggest racist ever, refering to her lover: "He possessed genes superior to my husband...". If she thought that, why stay married to an inferior man? What is funny is that a so low woman, worst than a cheap street whore, could think in superiority terms...She, the one that abdicated of all her dignity as a woman, becoming a cum dumpster for anyone, talking about superiority...1*

Not even worth criticizing.

Their audience... Not try their level best to drive them away.

No plot, No Character depth, No intrigue. Sorry punctuation does not an author make!

Get some skill and try again...I'd rather wead the washington Post Want Ad's

Nothing personal. Lots of people can't spin a decent tale. This was just awful.

Good LW story and for annoy I can only say: " eat shit"!!

Terrible stories.

gave it a 5!!!!

I do like this story series, and I like the main characters. Jeanette is driving Roland hard, so very hard. Yet he is surprisingly accepting of her demands and humiliations. But on the plot, her involving Roland’s boss is so clearly unwise. There must be a dozen ways the situation could go sideways, endangering Roland’s job, his ability to do his job, his potential for future employment. Guess I’ll find out when I read the next chapter. J.