All Comments on 'Room 310'

Please Continue. Pay no never mind to the nay sayers that should be in church listening to old tapes of Par Robertson and Jerry Falwell.

Sometimes people have affairs to "escape" from their troubles, and live in their fantasy life for a while. Now when the shit blows up is where it gets interesting, and that author, is what will keep me reading if you continue...

You can delete the bad comments from your stories - I would. If people want to proselitize and moralize, they shouldn't be reading Lit stories. Move on. Keep writing. NOW, some real edits = your story needed to be longer, it started well but it was rushed as it went along. I felt it ended prematurely. More details. More about your characters, what are they thinking? (Good at the start of the story but then you lost it as you went along.) What is the guy thinking? Why's he there? Add details. To my way of thinking your story should have been three or four times as long to cover the same ground.

Regards,

Romantic1

I really wish i was Luc He is a Lucky man

Maybe my comment won't get deleted again.

she had her life and it did not work as she wanted. life can throw a twist and she chose to change that a bit. at least she should be honest enough and leave and not be a hypocrit. otherwise, appropraite consequences

Romantic says people with morals shouldn't read LW. It's, of course, only for pieces of shit like him.