All Comments on 'Rosemary'

. . . doesn't have to be plausible, even believable, to be well written and an exciting hot read. I don't even need to know if they ever see each other again. This is a pretty good stand alone story.

So depressing! So it's just a story but did it really make it more erotic that she was betraying her husband and four children? Total selfishness.

Your poor grammar and incorrect word usage are very distracting. Don't rely on a spellchecker to correct these mistakes. Get someone who knows the English language to proofread your work before you submit a careless piece.

It always amazes me when some anonymous asshole seems like some fucking English major. Shit this is porn...sex...and a good fucking dirty story.

LIVE WITH IT!

I'm not more than a couple of minutes into this story and the author either can't remember who his characters are or can't spell. C'mon and have some pride in your work!