by eroticbaroness
...and I really like the concept of a "rabbi" being pursued by a snake.
Like the detail, would like to see the development between Emily and her boss and future ventures.
Loved the attention to detail and the setting used for the story.
A well done story with nice character work and detail. I was curious if the two ladies would be in conflict or how they'd relate, it seems Joanne is ushering emily into a new world or carnal delight. it feels like the beginning of a series or two parter at least
Awesome narration. Great story line, as good as watching a top class porn movie.. It got me going..
But have patience let it build... A MUST READ...!!!