by eroticbaroness
Awesome narration. Great story line, as good as watching a top class porn movie.. It got me going..
But have patience let it build... A MUST READ...!!!
A well done story with nice character work and detail. I was curious if the two ladies would be in conflict or how they'd relate, it seems Joanne is ushering emily into a new world or carnal delight. it feels like the beginning of a series or two parter at least
Loved the attention to detail and the setting used for the story.
Like the detail, would like to see the development between Emily and her boss and future ventures.
...and I really like the concept of a "rabbi" being pursued by a snake.