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twohadowstwohadowsover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

... for reading and taking the time to comment. I agree with you. This story - the whole Royal Theater Presents series - was written about 10 years ago while in a long-term, loveless relationship and without thought of being published. I hope I am better now. :-) We'll know as soon as I finish the first installment of a new series I've started. Look for Delilah Foxdóttir. She'll be cumming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good but not Great

Your writing is good and hot but its not 5 stars yet. I liked the story and what happens to the forced submissive but your story was a little short and you end a little too abruptly. Id love to see as much deatail as in the beginning of the at the end of your storys.

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I'm referred to as an artist. Meh. I make photographs, but it's not my place to call it art. Writing satisfies my creative urges while in between projects. It's good for my heart. I hope you find something enjoyable in my work. Kindness, twohadows