All Comments on 'Running the Hills'

Very good, but I hope there is more to this story! :)

So hot!! Got me soooo hard and wanting to be him in that shower taking it. Very nice. Hope there's more to cum.

For your first try I think you really hit it out of the park...Keep it up (sic)

Looking forward to more stories!!

this was very good for a first try.....hope to read more of you stories soon...

WOULD LOVE TO FIND YOU RUNNING ON A TRAIL AND GOING HOME TO HAVE SOME HOT MAN SEX WITH A HOT MAN LIKE YOURSELF

You really need to continue this story, or at least post more stories. Aside from a couple missed words here and there (accept for except) it was a great story.

Rather than give you specific feedback on your writing, I'll give you the results. My cock is throbbing and hard, I am stroking as I am trying to write this, the images rolling through my head are awesome and I really need to get fucked right now. You really, really turn me on!

Fantastic writing, great submission, I know you probably want constructive criticism to know where the flaws are... but this was really well done. I hope there will be a follow up. I look forward to reading your other work.

Peace and joy,

Shell

If this was a first story then you def need to keep writing! Well done :)

Mmmmmm that sounds so hot... i just came reading this

Great work! Continue with a bedroom scene..

Thanks so much, all, for your comments - FYI, Part 2 is up, Part 3 should be up very soon :)

I a\lmost lived this one, Thanks, looking forwards to next eddition.

But I'm glad I found it. Bravo on your first chapter.