All Comments on 'Rush Week Ch. 01'

This piles the shit deep enough.

# 1

...there is nothing to differentiate this story from all the other wife-sharing tales. I'd like to see this story go in an unexpected direction in future chapters. Maybe the husband gets jealous and asks his wife to stop, but it's too late; she's addicted to young cock. Maybe hubby gets some action with a young co-ed while wifey is fucking another stud. Maybe the daughter walks in while mommy is fucking her boyfriend and daddy is jerking off in the corner, and embarasamwnt and hilarity ensues.

I don't know. Something to break the usual paint-by-numbers storyline.

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He said: "Renee has always been faithful to me throughout our marriage." But What he should have said was: "I think Renee has always been faithful to me throughout our marriage."..that's two different things...

Very straight to the point, but not my cup of espresso.

patience is what it take to make a great trip

Come on, that is too unrealistic and then to be told to pick up as many guys as she wants?

Ugh. This is a disaster story, not a stroke story.

...ask us to suspend belief long enough to engage us in your story....OK, fine....but then your half of the arrangement is to make a story rationally believable long enough to justify our suspense of belief.

When you get so far, that fast, you ruin the mutual agreement by taking it well out of bounds too soon. Hubby just up and decides to "let the bulls in" on a lark, taking advantage of their next trip out of town to set his long-restrained wife out for the week.

Who is going to believe that, "I know she's been faithful...", when with what appears to be scant hesitation, she almost bolts into wanton, rampant sex with a young man, with no holding back? That just doesn't seem anywhere near normal, unless, of course, she's just doing openly what she's already been doing secretly for years.

Sounds like now that hubby is on board, it's OK to return to being a public slut.....because it seems she never stopped being one at all.

Oh, and BTW, your daughters are both sluts and you should be OK with that, since I am one, too.

Really? We're supposed to suck that up? After, years of loving faithfulness? There are too many poor conveniences and your story very quickly takes on the tenor of a teenage stroke fantasy, not much of a story at all.

"Ooo, baby, you fucked me so good 4 times last night and my hubby was thrilled!" After 22 years of faithful monogamy? No. Damn. Way.

Here we have contributors who take the time to write up something and then you have douchebags post negative shit about it. If you don't like reading this or think you can do better, then do it yourself and shut up. If there were no one contributing to this site, then there wouldn't be one for you douchebags to come to every day.

Thank you author for letting me go along with you on your journey and for letting me forget about the hatred in this world for a moment. (At least until I got to the comments)

Loved the first chapter....on to number 2

Please take me on your journey with you. I promise to not let you write anymore of these lame stories.

“renee’s virginal mound?” Seriously? She has a kid and literally just had sex an hour beforehand.