by MissPrimrose222
I hope Dani seeing her ex doesn't come back and bite her in the ass later. I think she should tell Ryan now and not later because she don't want to spoil her holiday. Ryan told her about his ex. She is over him so there should be no hesitation with Dani telling Ryan.
Puke, I've had enough of this corny story and Dani is a bitch to see her ex behind Ryan's back. Obviously doesn't love him as much as you keep repeatedly and sickeningly writing 1*.
Declaration of love, hot sex, a possible pregnancy and then the ex. I am so excited to see what happens next. This was a great chapter. I wonder how it will pan out with the "abusive" ex. Keep it up MissPrimrose.
Disregard Anon tactless comment....they just mad they ain't got no Ryan or Dani.
Ryan and Keith going toe to toe, and Keith ending up beaten to a bloody pulp. Guys like him are potential rapists/wife beaters in the making. It always starts with the jealousy, then escalates. Dani was lucky to get out of that relationship before it was too late. However, I still see Keith trying some bullshit, and Ryan having to put him in a hurt locker.
As for the sex, Good God! I'm just glad my wife hasn't seen this one yet.... oh wait. She's at my office door now.... oh hell.... :D
5 Stars!
I woulda commented and rated it earlier but you got me hot and bothered and I had to go find my boo and give him some attention!!!!! 5* hunny!!!!!! ;3
If it is so corny why bother read this story. So read another story. Stop being being a hater. Good story keep writing
Oh, a new evil ex on the scene. I love Dani though, I didn't like her brother at all, but I really love how Ryan talk to him straight w/o all the bs. I can't wait for your next chapter. I love this story and the way you are writing it. It's different, to the point and with a whole lot of sexxx! Lol, please post soon :D
Every chapter I read is better then the previous one. I love how they met. I just think that this is such a believable story. Sometimes the stories feel rushed or just about sex but this is a story that I not only would read but I would buy it. Keep up the wonderful work I'm excited to read what will happen next.
I'm also excited and waiting patiently on read any of your future stories--I love romantic Sci-fy
I love Ryan he's a real man unlike Keith. So glad that she kicked him to the curb, hi was and I am sure is cray cray.
Caroline and Keith are perfect for one another. Both crazy, arrogant, think they can get what they want, fools.
Great line 'Man down on aisle 15! Man down on aisle 15!'. Had me laughing out loud, literally.