All Comments on 'Ryan Ch. 07'

by MissPrimrose222

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

I hope Dani seeing her ex doesn't come back and bite her in the ass later. I think she should tell Ryan now and not later because she don't want to spoil her holiday. Ryan told her about his ex. She is over him so there should be no hesitation with Dani telling Ryan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Puke, I've had enough of this corny story and Dani is a bitch to see her ex behind Ryan's back. Obviously doesn't love him as much as you keep repeatedly and sickeningly writing 1*.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh snap.....

Declaration of love, hot sex, a possible pregnancy and then the ex. I am so excited to see what happens next. This was a great chapter. I wonder how it will pan out with the "abusive" ex. Keep it up MissPrimrose.

Disregard Anon tactless comment....they just mad they ain't got no Ryan or Dani.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago
hotness

You had me when I got to the bottom of the first page... wow!!!

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
I see....

Ryan and Keith going toe to toe, and Keith ending up beaten to a bloody pulp. Guys like him are potential rapists/wife beaters in the making. It always starts with the jealousy, then escalates. Dani was lucky to get out of that relationship before it was too late. However, I still see Keith trying some bullshit, and Ryan having to put him in a hurt locker.

As for the sex, Good God! I'm just glad my wife hasn't seen this one yet.... oh wait. She's at my office door now.... oh hell.... :D

5 Stars!

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessover 10 years ago

I woulda commented and rated it earlier but you got me hot and bothered and I had to go find my boo and give him some attention!!!!! 5* hunny!!!!!! ;3

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

If it is so corny why bother read this story. So read another story. Stop being being a hater. Good story keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more please !

I can't wait for more, keep up the good work ;)

cuteButSexy218cuteButSexy218over 10 years ago
More please :)

Oh, a new evil ex on the scene. I love Dani though, I didn't like her brother at all, but I really love how Ryan talk to him straight w/o all the bs. I can't wait for your next chapter. I love this story and the way you are writing it. It's different, to the point and with a whole lot of sexxx! Lol, please post soon :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
thanks

I glade t updates are coming back to back

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just stupid

Enough said

DnaebugsDnaebugsover 10 years ago

Every chapter I read is better then the previous one. I love how they met. I just think that this is such a believable story. Sometimes the stories feel rushed or just about sex but this is a story that I not only would read but I would buy it. Keep up the wonderful work I'm excited to read what will happen next.

I'm also excited and waiting patiently on read any of your future stories--I love romantic Sci-fy

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 10 years ago
That was hotter than hooker in church!

I love Ryan he's a real man unlike Keith. So glad that she kicked him to the curb, hi was and I am sure is cray cray.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect Match

Caroline and Keith are perfect for one another. Both crazy, arrogant, think they can get what they want, fools.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Jealous

Damn you, damn you Ryan Sinclair! You lucky bastard!

SirBigfootSirBigfootabout 8 years ago
LMAO

Great line 'Man down on aisle 15! Man down on aisle 15!'. Had me laughing out loud, literally.

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