All Comments on 'Sally Enters My Life'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Grammar

It is "spit" or "spat"......Spit if it is today, Spat if it is past as in most of your story since you are telling it in the past.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 8 years ago
A nice story ...

... I look forward to reading Chapter 2 soon. Don't bother about nonny's spiteful comments; I don't think he has ever grasped the idea of fantasy fiction.

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