All Comments on 'Samantha Challenges Her Dom Ch. 02'

Sorry for me this chapter wasn’t erotic at all, if they’re all strangers then there’s no way of knowing if they’re free of STDs it’s completely irresponsible. A Dom is meant to look out for the health and well-being of their Sub. As it stands some of them are causing actual pain (as in non erotic). Use her isn’t exactly free reign to hurt her.

IF it’s a genuine prearranged scene then there’s no need to exclude it in the narrative for the readers it’s not the same thing as her not knowing that everything is across safe. So in that instance he’s failing as a Dom. What next, after she’s been used then he’s going to dump her? That would be a really shitty move.

I found chapter 1 erotic but IMHO you missed the mark in this chapter.

Tess (UK)