All Comments on 'Samantha Falls for Internet Bad Boy'

It fits.

Awful, just plain awful

I liked it. I think you had a good balance of pleasure and pain. It wasn't sadistic, as it could have easily been, with this style, and had a good dose of sexiness. Good flow and story. Look forward to more! :)

There are some hot sex scenes in this but the main character goes from virgin to filthy-mouthed whore in under an hour... totally unconvincing.

This was written in a scene depiction style, not stream-of-consciousness or life-reflective style. Only events, conversation, at most surface thoughts were represented; because of this we can't be sure of Sam's proclivities or pre-dispositions were and are.

We're watching a movie with minimal flashbacks or back-story. A porn flick?

To author: gave you a 5 for this first submission, and all the comments should be pointing in directions to do even better.

If I'd wanted non-consensual I would have clicked on it. This is just a gross story.