All Comments on 'Samantha Falls for Internet Bad Boy'

If I'd wanted non-consensual I would have clicked on it. This is just a gross story.

This was written in a scene depiction style, not stream-of-consciousness or life-reflective style. Only events, conversation, at most surface thoughts were represented; because of this we can't be sure of Sam's proclivities or pre-dispositions were and are.

We're watching a movie with minimal flashbacks or back-story. A porn flick?

To author: gave you a 5 for this first submission, and all the comments should be pointing in directions to do even better.

There are some hot sex scenes in this but the main character goes from virgin to filthy-mouthed whore in under an hour... totally unconvincing.

I liked it. I think you had a good balance of pleasure and pain. It wasn't sadistic, as it could have easily been, with this style, and had a good dose of sexiness. Good flow and story. Look forward to more! :)

Awful, just plain awful

It fits.