All Comments on 'Sandra's First Submission Ch. 01'

such a great first chapter,can't wait to read chapter 2. what a wild ride. to have this gal participate in her submission,her restraint. she's knowledgable but untried.

she trust him from all those emails.he's brought her along,slow and true. now he's reeling her in. devine...

the suspense of waiting,knowing he's gonna use her,his way. she is blind and helpless,by her own hand. take her!

i hope he floods her brain with more words. the key to a females arousal...at least mine...i love the details.

thanks R.

I was willing to see how the intro developed,but it didn't.

I will look at the next chapter but I wager it won't be better.