All Comments on 'Sara, My New Pet'

This was a great way to start my day!

wonderful keep the good work up i enjoy ur stories. These are the best i have read in this site. I am a submissive male looking for female Domme u know any thank you for ur time to write these stories. And i thank you for reading my comments

That was so hot, please continue with the adventures of Sarah

Didn't reach climax.Could have been better.

A good story, a few errors on spelling but nothing to bother about. One thing I would like to have seen was a bit more about Sara's thoughts and motivations.

I wanted to know how Sara decided that being a submissive was want she wanted; more background. I got lost with the issue of the boots. I thought she was supposed to leave them in garage. It was a good start though, but an editor could easily fix some of the wording and punctuation. Would like to read more about this story and others.

keep writing I want more!

I agree with the other comment that stated there needed to be a little more background to the characters. Why did Sara decide to submit to you and Mike? More character development would be good to get a better understanding of the dominant characters. How did they meet?

Furthermore, I was a little confused at your orgasm scene. There was little explanation.

It also seems to me that Mike is somewhat submissive in the story as well. Was this intended or were they supposed to be equal owners of Sara?

This would have been a much better story if there were supporting chapters. There is mention of a long journey and a serious relationship between the dom and sub. There needs to be more explanation to better explain this situation.

Otherwise, it was a good start.

It was generally well thought out. I would have liked a bit more give and take, with a mistake here and there as they get to know the new pet and she them. Sometimes mistakes can be fun!

Still, a pleasure to read and I hope you continue to write more chapters.

Leaving someone who is bound alone is completely irresponsible and shows no consideration for their safety which is one of the principal responsibilities of a mistress.

love it when a Woman is in charge.. i could feel You being held as You came..... lovely description...

Please continue this story. I would love to read more about what this couple does with this woman.

Lovely story and so hot. Having served a married couple myself, it brought back good memories. Would love to read more.

Buy a blowup doll you idiots.