All Comments on 'Sarah & Steve Ch. 04'

by MarkThyme

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gnfgnfalmost 20 years ago
Looks like

the anon feminist, doesn't care for this part of the story. As long as the wife has her high heel in her husbands neck everything is fine. But along comes a young woman who like sex with a guy and she shuts up. Can't win them all i guess.

George

Tootight1Tootight1over 8 years ago
not going to happen

this could be a really good story, if you took some time to look at it like a real life type of thing, rather than just justifying words. let the reader know what's going on a little, it's a story. you cant keep everything from the reader. had he suggested in the past that wanted to dress up, or be a cuckold, or that he had been keeping an eye on his neighbor, and has spoken to about it, or spoken to her to set her up with her plan, something to let the reader have an idea. too many secrets here. he still doesn't even ask a single question, not going to happen.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

She going to whore with Bobby.

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