by thegrtwman
I did like the way you stopped it at that point. Also the build up to it;not straight in at the deep end. Is she or isnt she pregnant? Keep it up!
It is a good start. I hope in ch.2 Sarah gets pregnant with twins for the first time. Then decides that she likes being pregnant, and decides to be a barefoot, naked, baby making machine giving birth every 9.5-10 months.
Great first chapter - got to see more. How do the couple deal with the possibility (certainty?) that they have just made a baby?!