All Comments on 'Sarah Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
This story has a lot of potential.

I did like the way you stopped it at that point. Also the build up to it;not straight in at the deep end. Is she or isnt she pregnant? Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
pregnant

It is a good start. I hope in ch.2 Sarah gets pregnant with twins for the first time. Then decides that she likes being pregnant, and decides to be a barefoot, naked, baby making machine giving birth every 9.5-10 months.

SamWarrensSamWarrensover 7 years ago
Uh Oh!

Great first chapter - got to see more. How do the couple deal with the possibility (certainty?) that they have just made a baby?!

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I don't know what it is, but ever since my first time, I've had this weird thing for guys cumming inside the girl. (It might have something to do with the fact that my bf did this our first time...)