All Comments on 'Sarah Grimlock'

This stupid, half-assed fantasy is about as erotic as a gushing fire hose.

awesome...loved it.....would dearly love to read more

Cute story that flip flops between making me want to laugh and making me horny. Could use some grammar checks (there were a few typos and incorrect words) but it didn't distract too much from the story.

The biggest issue I have with this is the fact that Sarah's penis is repeatedly referred to as being eight inches in length, but on one occasion Sarah supposedly reaches to the start of Sally's stomach, separately she pours her semen straight into Sally's stomach...

Unless you're fucking a midget, I don't see how 8 inches could be sufficient size to achieve these things. One assumes that either the author made a mistake here or her penis just magically extends and the author never mentions it...

There's also some very sloppy grammar and weird language choices ("nonaggressive" instead of saying "passive" is one example, but there's plenty more.)

Also, hairy balls turn me off but that's just a personal issue. No biggie.

2/5.

More please

This is quite well written. It's hard to find good futa stories. I also like the humor that is in the story without ruining how hot it is. I would definitely like to see more.