All Comments on 'Sarah's Agreement Ch. 02'
by stevebaines
- 37 Comments
stevebainesalmost 15 years agoAuthorFrom The Author - I am astonished that people who read non-consent stories, feel they have some moral high-ground to attack story content. To the(cowardly and weak)anonymous writer of the first comment 'if you don't like it, then write your own and get out from up your own ass'. There may well NOT be a part 3 as a result of this. Stevie.
stevebainesalmost 15 years agoAuthorFrom The Author - I am astonished that people who read non-consent stories, feel they have some moral high-ground to attack story content. To the(cowardly and weak)anonymous writer of the first comment 'if you don't like it, then write your own and get out from up your own ass'. There may well NOT be a part 3 as a result of this. Stevie.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoplease keep writing this is one of the better stories i have read here plz keep this series going rob
digdaddyrichalmost 15 years agoIf he's going to fuck her get on with it, if not then what's the point trying to be made. Strap her down and fuck her up the ass, and treat her like the whore she looks to be. Knock her silly ass up. Give her something to think about for years to come while her belly swells up. She must be a really stupid cunt to let herself to get in the situation she is in now.
jon14ualmost 15 years agoGreat start well planned and written. Now it's time to get to the good stuff. Short chapters with little happening don't engage the reader.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoignore the idiots this is a great story please hurry with part 3
a very horny male awaits
Anonymousalmost 15 years agolike what he writes you need to not comment and go write your own stories. Well wannabe writer this story is bit of self justification and self vindication but not worth reading. Enjoy striking letters on the keyboard but go out and live some life first.
stevebainesalmost 15 years agoAuthorShe was stripped. Then she was strapped down. Then he slipped his cock into her and reamed her until she bled to death. Then he went back to working as a cahier for the bank. The end! NOW is that okay????? You are such NONCES!!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agodo not pay any attention to the idiots comments. i find the beginning of this story a thumbs up. you have the foundation all set. now is time to construct the walls before we put the roof on. i am thinking , what if???? what if you take the story from sarah's perspective , from her viewpoint. what is she thinking? is she wet? can we ask her if this fantasy of her ex husband "excites" her? what about bob and leroy? has dr. ahmed talked to the ex husband about the plan for leroy , if there is one? is the ex husband apprehensive about leroy? has dr. ahmed taked to leroy and bob about being gentle? after all , the goal is for sarah not only to be fucked , but to be loved , for her to know that these men love her and want for her to enjoy this. it very well may happen that the ex husband will once again be her prince riding on a white horse. hmmmm!!! i sure hope that the colleagues will be allowed to leave their chairs , sometimes to get a closer look. sarah seems to be the type of woman that will abhor the fact that these gentlemen will be called over to witness at the precise time that sarah begins to get wet , or shall we say , wetter. any way , steve , i just wanted to raise questions and thoughts that you might consider helpfull.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoOne big turn-on. Superbly written. So hot when Dr Ahmed takes charge of Sarah. You must continue this fabulous story. Ignore the clowns!
Anonymousover 14 years agoOK, you've set the scene, now for the examination and the rest ! ! ! ! !
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story could have been good, but it is far too drawn out, I almost fell asleep reading it. Call it quits in chapter 3. And by the way, I am NOT an idiot.
erosandpsycheover 14 years agomy personal taste is for a more rapid advance toward the erotic details. get down and dirty with that exam! let yourself go! I am looking forward to it. (female)
PEA1over 14 years agoYou know what? Yes this is a little drawn out but that doesn't mean it's not worth reading. If people can't appreciate a well composed piece then maybe they should just buy a mag and look at the pictures, that doesn't involve any effort or imagination. Keep going, the best is yet to come!
Anonymousover 13 years agoWhat a superb story. HOt...Hot....HOOOOOTTTTT!!!! Brilliant! More please!!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis tory is one of the BEST!!!! You write brilliantly! More please!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoI need to know what happens next, I'll do anything you want.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoYour writing is great...enough detail without it being too much. I can't wait for the next chapter. And btw I'm female.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoYou got me all hot and bothered and I want to know the ending PLEASE
Anonymousover 10 years agoFrom the author.
To the anonymous feedback below who wrote 'I need to know what happens next, I'll do anything you want'.
I will take you up on that offer. I have some very dirty ideas! Contact me at stevie_baines@yahoo.com
Anonymous6 months agoLove the story. GREAT setup thus far. Please continue. Anticipation for the finish is quite high!
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