All Comments on 'Sarah's Birthday Surprise Ch. 02'

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jrgg43jrgg43over 11 years ago
Thank you for the slow build up and...

interesting conversation. I like the way you keep the reader guessing by keeping Sarah guessing. Personally I like the tech angle and the options you gave to Sarah. I am looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more please

I am looking forward to the next chapter. This is not my normal topic of interest, but i find I would like more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
when is the next chapter

great story next part soon please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very good

I loved this story. I hope you add a new chapter soon. This was well written and I love the story content.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please continue

This story is hot, I would really like to read more of it!

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