All Comments on 'Sara's New Life'

by golden_eyes94

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Of course Sara called the Police

And Evelyn went to jail for things like robbery and assault. The end to some real drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved it!

So dirty and perverse, I love human toilet stories like this. Please say you're working on a sequel :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more please

wish ti see more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
(Schreiben Sie etwas aus eigener Erfahrung!)

I would have loved to read the story that you started writing,,, the part where Sara was masturbating as she watched Victoria pissing her panties over the kitchen sink,,, and her fantasy of drinking Victoria's piss... Oh wow, that was hot!

I'm giving you 5-stars,,, along with a little positive criticism,,, yes, write something from personal experience that you know about,,, or do a lot more research..

Gay Kat.

goldblokegoldblokeover 6 years ago
Good start, strange finish

Chapters 1 & 2 were hot. I found Ch 3 a bit incongruous and unrealistic, I'm afraid. More of Sara spying on her roommate wetting herself and the like, please!

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