by golden_eyes94
Chapters 1 & 2 were hot. I found Ch 3 a bit incongruous and unrealistic, I'm afraid. More of Sara spying on her roommate wetting herself and the like, please!
I would have loved to read the story that you started writing,,, the part where Sara was masturbating as she watched Victoria pissing her panties over the kitchen sink,,, and her fantasy of drinking Victoria's piss... Oh wow, that was hot!
I'm giving you 5-stars,,, along with a little positive criticism,,, yes, write something from personal experience that you know about,,, or do a lot more research..
Gay Kat.
So dirty and perverse, I love human toilet stories like this. Please say you're working on a sequel :)
And Evelyn went to jail for things like robbery and assault. The end to some real drivel.