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Story line, butttttttt, you, need to become, incredibly serious, concerning your lack of details.........sounds, smells, tastes, textures...........to make my point.........have someone, you trust, bind you/tie you up........creating an environment, of insecurity, not sure of anything........having your world turned upside down........having your secrets, revealed...........then, take an inventory of what you feel, hear, think, smell, how dry is your mouth.....is every capillary, a speaker for your pulse.........

You can do soooooo, much better.......