All Comments on 'Sea Swing'

This is like reading a car repair manual. Dull, boring and no joy.Nothing erotic. Your story never comes alive. Even if it is total fantasy, making it seem real might work. 2/5

No tension or drama. No overwrought angst. No jealous husbands, pickaxe handles, human trafficking, or Mexican whorehouses. No cartoonish revenge or dull recitation of divorce terms.

Just a nice little story of a fun-loving couple having drama-less fun with other like-minded people.

What the hell is this story doing here?!?!

(LOL.)

Thanks for contributing.

And after reading stories like this... You still think you'll find one on this site?

You're just a fag retarded fool!

who, like you, spend their time fucking strangers they meet out at sea. Yeah, that's a really entertaining erotic fantasy. What's the down side?

not peeked or peaked. 1/ stimulate (interest or curiosity).

"you have piqued my curiosity about the man"

synonyms: stimulate, arouse, rouse, provoke, whet, awaken, excite, kindle, stir, galvanize

"his curiosity was piqued"

SJ is right it's easy and free of drama. But it's some kind of drama that makes the story. Seduction? Cheating? Whatever it is it makes it more interesting than the "we just went to bed" variety.

In common local English there is NEVER a definite article before the Geographic Entity Baja. Not when referring to the peninsula, nor a short version of either State's name.

Fingernails on chalkboard obnoxious, totally Tourist, and not in a good way.

Please stop the madness!:-).

BTW, nice story, SJ nailed it. Go Unicorns!

I hope the couples manage another encounter, with a bit more focus on the men enjoying each other as well?

A throughly enjoyable tale. It must be a small yacht if it only could take four adults. Even my minuscule boat slept 6 Two couples with privacy.