by haremgirl
I love it! What great sex you write about, haremgirl. The mystery deepens and the lovin' is really heatin' up. Keep it up, grrl! (Hee-hee!)
I was so aroused by this chapter. Damnit! Really really sizzling hot. Love the way you write. Your characters came alive practically to call us in to enjoy and experienced the headiness of the story. Tantalizingly and highly erotic.
Well done! Well done! Well done!
OMG, the love scenes in this story are hot as hell. I love the way you describe them, they're so vivid.
The plot thickens more, I think that Sarah's boss probably did try to rape her and she just defended herself, but how's Brian going to get her out of this, he can't hide her forever. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thanks.
...three chpts. w/o aidan and naomi? seems odd to just have them completely disappear in a story about them. Maybe scenes could occassionslly flash to them on their honeymoon...
Brian certainly has a major chore for himself now.. How can he prove she acted in self defense?? The pervert is dead.. Is there a witness??