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MsRoseEvansMsRoseEvansabout 9 years ago
Nicely done!

I was worries when you rushed in, but this latest chapter is well paced and feels very authentic - well done Sir

Gypsy_LCBCGypsy_LCBCabout 9 years ago
More please !!!!!

Please post more I am addicted this story has hooked me completely.... It has made me rethink what I want in a dom... I am begging please post more soon sir. Xxxxx C

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Well this chapter was certainly very well written. I hope that the revision of this update was the cause of delay from this story being posted on Tuesday as normal and on that note I would very much enjoy if the next chapter came out very soon as I am completely engrossed in this story and am desperately waiting for the next installment. Beautiful work as always Mr. Thomas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
thank you again

Shit, I have started, erased, and rewritten this comment 5x. I'm not a writer. In brief: LOVE IT. Please keep writing. You will never know how much this series has meant to me. Thank you

KClookingKClookingover 8 years ago
Love it

I've actually started passing the sex parts just to read the story. Yeah, weird!!!

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Two on a cock

It will be interesting to see if Elizabeth can contain her jealousy. They are alone together tonight. What will happen?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Edge" the reader.

Excellent, great build up to awesome sex. It's rare to find a writer who can "edge" the reader.

I've paid for books that are inferior to this.

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