by CJT
Excellent, great build up to awesome sex. It's rare to find a writer who can "edge" the reader.
I've paid for books that are inferior to this.
It will be interesting to see if Elizabeth can contain her jealousy. They are alone together tonight. What will happen?
I've actually started passing the sex parts just to read the story. Yeah, weird!!!
Shit, I have started, erased, and rewritten this comment 5x. I'm not a writer. In brief: LOVE IT. Please keep writing. You will never know how much this series has meant to me. Thank you
Well this chapter was certainly very well written. I hope that the revision of this update was the cause of delay from this story being posted on Tuesday as normal and on that note I would very much enjoy if the next chapter came out very soon as I am completely engrossed in this story and am desperately waiting for the next installment. Beautiful work as always Mr. Thomas
Please post more I am addicted this story has hooked me completely.... It has made me rethink what I want in a dom... I am begging please post more soon sir. Xxxxx C
I was worries when you rushed in, but this latest chapter is well paced and feels very authentic - well done Sir