All Comments on 'Secretly in Public View'

This is a nice little story and I look forward to more. It is always tantalizing to read how a woman gradually becomes more comfortable showing off her tits. Far more believable. The part about Sara bending over in the restaurant helps us all relive those moments when any of us suddenly receive a great and unexpected view of a woman's breasts. Very hot.

Good story, but it kept us hanging at the end. I'm looking forward to further adventures.

Absolutely fabulous. I plan to have my wife read it and maybe she will take the hint.

Good story, but it could have used some more dialogue between them. Maybe also some chatting during the teasing during dinner.

Now, that's the way "I" like it. Thanks for the story