All Comments on 'Secrets of a Seductress'

Presenting the same ideas, with examples of the wit and charm, in a conversation with a man, allowing your character to tell her story, rather than the disembodied narrator. But I like your general theme, that a seduction can occur without there ever being real physical contact. Indeed, some of us LOVE that kind of interaction.

Thanks for writing,

As written, it probably should be in the non erotic category. The writing quality is good, but it lacks plot. It s a nice introduction to the woman's mind set, but doesn't go any where. So this isn't a hot one, I suspect your next one will be.

Perfect stand alone story. My girl friend Anna came to mind, and your story traced my image of her. Keep writting.

8BB

Excellent. Just. Excellent.

What. Where will you take this? Not hard to guess at all.