All Comments on 'Security Catches Us In The Act!'

First and foremost, the writer is in very bad need of a good editor. The mistakes, errors and omissions were a constant distraction and very amateurish.

The ending also needs work.

Writing is like creating a jewel from a crude gemstone; it takes skill in the original cutting, and then it requires polish, polish, polish. Otherwise, something that may have appeared desirable at first, becomes dull and unattractive.

This is the work of a beginner who needs good advice from an experienced writer of erotica.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and plot

Thank you