All Comments on 'Seduced My Maid and Her Family Ch. 01'

I'm interested in how this story progresses.

Nice way of narrating the story. Please see if you can improve the spelling and grammar. Look forward to more in this story.

for being a true story , seems to be made up, at the start you said I have been trying to seduce her for a long time. Savita has been working in our house for the last 5 years and I have never seen her from a sexual point of view. this doesnt make sense.

also to remember exact word for word converation is unrealistic ,

not a bad story just treat it for what it is a story

Make it real, for a real story it seems a little animated. .

make the characters sound authentic and build a compelling narrative.

awesome hair and mature fetish story. loved it! please continue.

please,finish the story.it' one of the best i've ever read......

Nice story..!! I didn't not knew at age of 45-50 also people have hair fetish..!! Nice story it seems like a pure story..!! Good keep it up..!!

Waiting for the next part..!!