All Comments on 'Seduction on a Plane'

by brianup4nething1979

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durritticolumndurritticolumnabout 13 years ago

Great little ditty, keep it up (As it were)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Why miss out articles and pronouns?

It makes it read like textspeak, not English.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
the

There's this real handy word all (the) rest of us have been using for a while now. It's called "the", and it sure comes in mighty handy when you're writing stories and stuff... give it a try sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Story

Thanks for this....it sure brought back some good memories of an older woman who I knew when I was younger...thanks again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
omg

Omg I cant belive I found u!!! Its Katherine if u want to meet up again call 619 864 2864!!! Hope to hear from u!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Contact

Did you call Katherine? Of course it could be any person who wrote you from "anonymous" with a SD #. But now that gives you a whole new opening for yet another story! Please inform us with inquiring minds... each of us want to get HARD or wet again!

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

***Thanks for the read.

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