All Comments on 'See Through Me Ch. 10'

...cant wait for chapter 11...

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Loving it.

Makes my cock throb.

Thanks,

Alan

I am honestly intrigued to where this next chapter goes. I was honestly growing a little bored with the series as so much of it has been sex. Yes hot sex, but sex. I'm excited to see if the next chapter has a little bit more plot to it. I definitely want to see where this story line goes.

Thanks so much for your comment. I struggle with the plot aspect somewhat, I admit. I'm a big fan of Maya Banks, who does great plot, but the one aspect where I feel she falls short is the perfection of her leading men. They all have the rugged alpha characteristics, as well as female sensitivity and communication. It is noticeably unrealistic. I am more inclined to project men as they really are, imperfect. Women as well for that matter. Both of my leads are imperfect in general, but might ultimately be perfect for each other. It would be a struggle in real life, and it is indeed a struggle in writing. Trying to keep things realistic as I can, as crazy as that may sound. Some readers it will hit home, most it will not. But at the very least, you will have the hot sex scenes. Let me know what you think next chapter. :) J

You just laid out one of the most fucked up but so intense of fantasies of mine... that whole... taking a pee while the guy watches. The control play is just...wow. I don't think some people understand how conditioned we are.... you can't pee anywhere else but on the toilet and when you are by yourself. But when someone else controls that feeling...wow..just wow. :fans herself: This series is SUCH a guilty pleasure of mine