All Comments on 'See Through Me Ch. 12'

3 stars. At least the story is moving forward. Time for the pregnancy and the HEA.

This chapter was a bit short but it was hot and kinky. However, I do like more character development and mind games. All in all, this additional mostly kept the plot alive rather than progressing forward in a very pleasant way.

I am loving this story. Good characters, super hot...I can't wait to see where you take it next.

at this rate her she might get breast cancer or ovarion cancer or rectum injury or he might actually injure her womb making her infertile since she is pretty new to sex and then he will leave her for being barren once he get tire leaving her unable to appreciate any good guy she might ever meet

i love your writing also i know its non con bdsm but its difficult to believe he cares for her and still gave her injuries thats quite hypocritic of joe