All Comments on 'Selected for Sport Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Is there more?!

Just found this story and really enjoyed it ... but ... is that it?! Such a tease! Will there be more?!PUHLEEZ?! ;)

Fluffy07Fluffy07about 12 years ago
that can't be the end of it!!! :(

there has to be more... this story's so good and it has so much potential… please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Continue

You have to continue this story, Its very very good,

very well writen and has so much pontential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OMG!

This can't be the end.

You have to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
There has to be more

You must write more chapters on this one

I stmbled on this story while reading your new one,and it's one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
ohh come on!

please don't do this to us this story is excellent!!! please finish the story we all want to know how this ends please post something soon don't let it end like this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
PLEASE!

Please finish this story, its got so much potential from where you left it and how their relationship develops, please finish it! It could be one of the best stories on literotica, please don't leave us hanging....

Rud1GirlRud1Girlalmost 12 years ago
Canvas

Any time you want a canvas to block out your story - I'm game

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Damn!

I hope that's not it! I want to see what is going to happen between them! Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

MORE PLEASE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot!

So much potential. I really wish there was more!

star306566star306566over 11 years ago
great so far

More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Amazing

This story is great please write more!!!!!!!!

Ellienora35Ellienora35about 11 years ago
I stumbled on to you

I stumbled onto you through your Pawn series. I am hoping that you will please finish this story. You set it up so well. Is there something in the fruit that keeps women from conceiving? Did the man get a childhood illness? Does she get pregnant and they fall in love? Please, please finish this.

4nicolas4nicolasabout 11 years ago

Dear god, why did you stop writing this story?

I was thinking the same about the fruit, and I really hope you will restart writing this amazing story. It deserves it!

Please don't make me beg. At least a conclusion chapter, though it deserves much more. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

dinddindover 10 years ago

Your writing skills are excellent and the story is very intriguing. I hope you will add more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What Brilliant News!

It's great that you are going to continue this, after you have finished your Pawn Series. Thankyou so much for leaving a comment and letting us know. I love Pawn Among Wolves, and know it could carry on for a while yet, but at least now we know that once it is finished, you will be able to continue this. Ohhhh! We Are Blessed and Spoilt for choice. Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou! :)

Come on all you guys/readers out there, comment on this and Pawn, and we might get chapters posted a lot faster.

LyndolynLyndolynover 9 years ago
Hot

That was totally hot, but the typo "vaginity" made me laugh all hard.

SmileWhenYouMeanItSmileWhenYouMeanItover 9 years agoAuthor
Vaginity

Oops. He he he.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

If I was her, I woulda been ten types of pissed. XD

mitchawamitchawaover 3 years ago

The seduction was slow. Her response natural. Yet, her orgasms were wrenched from her by a man without a care. Rape long endured becomes a pleasure, but still a rape.

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